So, finally got some work done. Which includes a few edits on the story. Mostly I added descriptions to characters and places and just generally tried to make everything more accessible; which is the main point my family's been telling me to fix. I also removed a character that was doing nothing for the story and changed some of the dialogue; and this is all in the first part!
And because I'm a lazy ass, here's the edited first part (edited again, for the... I think this is round ten? Eleven maybe? Ah well, writing is editing.)
Dimensional Warriors The Gathering 10.0:
Open Office (.odt)
Word (.doc)
Rich Text (.rtf)
Text (.txt)
With all that said and done Professor Astonishing officially goes weekly starting this week! Enjoy!
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